1. Some of the biggest concerns I had while writing my first draft were organizing my thoughts and making sure that I address everything.
2. An example of something that my peers liked was my thesis. Kayla commented, “this is a strong thesis because it explains a bit of your stance while also explaining the purpose of liberal arts”.
3. In my introduction where I introduce Scheuer I have in Justin’s words, “You do a nice job thoroughly introducing Scheuer’s article, but maybe a bit too much. You don’t want the whole intro to sound like his words instead of your own.” Something I can do to improve the flow of the paper is to reduce the amount of information in the introduction paragraph
4. I believe UNE demonstrates a well representation of a liberal arts education.